Peaceful is The Lovers Night
Two lovers sit on a porch, this a Summers night
With a cooling breeze and stars in sight
Swaying gently on a swinging seat made for two
Bathed in moonlight before them are lights of the harbours eve view
Embracing as they sit whilst sharing a passionate lovers kiss
A cherished moment in time for them both and such pure bliss
For ever thank full for the moment when on that fateful day
His eyes met hers where she on a white sandy beach relax and lay
Six!!! That darn beach cricket, tennis ball went well astray
And from out of no where it came her way
Knocking her sun glasses off her face, as outwards her arms did suddenly flay
What a total surprise for her on that relaxing holiday
Oh! the shock of a tennis ball hitting her head
"What the bloomin' heck was that? She loudly said
As he came running towards her as gallantly as can be
His eyes met hers and it was then that he said calmly to she
"Are you ok? I am sorry about that,
Beach cricket is great fun when one gets to bat
But I have just had the biggest thrill of my life
And now wonder.... Are you available to be my wife?"
Still dazed by what had gone on in the moments preceding
She thought her day at the beach would be for sunning and reading
No way had she expected to be hit in the head
Let alone also finding a new, Very Best Friend.
You see when the eyes of the lovers met for the first time
The feeling was mutual and quite sublime
A feeling of knowing from forever and a day
Was the feeling they both felt from that unusual meeting, right up until today.
Now many years have passed by like a surreal dream
With so much happening in between
It will be tonight on their special anniversary eve
Sharing together this special time embracing with love, both, to give and receive
Intimately sharing the joys of passion by candle light
As passions subside they embrace once more both aware that now peaceful is their night.
As with many lovers whenever their love for each other in passion and desire unites
Love becomes their comfort and these be especially beautiful and blissfully peaceful nights.
Milli 09
if this be true
ReplyDeleteanniversary today
best wishes to you
come from my way
and big HUGS..; ))
A beautifully scripted story... a journey of love
ReplyDeleteMilli this is like a fairytale come true and there is love flowing softly (and powerfully) here!
ReplyDeleteDana it is not my story unfortunately, but it is a story compiled by me from observing many of the love stories that I have ben privy to along my way. To see people united in and through love no matter how the circumstances prevailed is a very wondrous part of being human. I compile and write from my observations and then bring forth parts of my own experiences as well.
ReplyDeleteAnniversaries between those who love are always special bonding times but it really pays I think to use those between days as special days too. My thoughts.. LOL
Big Hugs and Thank You
Yes it is a journey of Love as Love is a journey and not the destination...
ReplyDeleteThank you Danette for the interpretation of this poem story as I intended it to be.
ReplyDeleteAlways welcome Belita and life does throw us all curve balls at times least expected. I am so glad that you enjoyed. This is fiction and creative expression with basis from my observations.
ReplyDeleteOh Milli how beautiful a story.....***sighs*** and thinks do men still exist that are like that? lol
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend hun.
Oh and thanks for coming to see me!
ReplyDeleteMilli Love and for that matter life is always such a great journey and you have described it so well.
ReplyDeleteYou were square leg then?
ReplyDeleteCould have been worse at silly mid on. lol
It doesn't matter how the love story begins, main thing is that it is a success (and so is this poem)
ReplyDeleteThey actually do!!!! and some women too!
ReplyDeleteRita you know how to write a good love story too. thanks for stopping by.
ReplyDeleteLOL here it is a done thing any day on the beach you will find the bat the tennis balls and the make shift stumps LOL and usually you aim for the ball to go into the water. Fun in the sun!
ReplyDeleteLOL Takes my English friend to discuss 'the match' LOL.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat I am happy that you commented.
ReplyDeleteYah!!! Vickie yes I got to Say Id love to read that this happened to you too one day..soon.
ReplyDeleteNice one..love stories abound..:)
ReplyDelete