My Moonlight Mermaid
She lives beneath the turbulent sea
I have seen her briefly and fleetingly
Her long and golden locks of hair
Her skin so pale it glistens fair
It was on a voyage many years ago
I spied her shape, on a rock below
We were anchored on the island side
Of a far off land both high and wide
Naught wind, just gentle rocking
I strode the deck, as my ship sat docking
Around the port side and starboard too
I wandered that night, admiring the view
Of brilliant stars across the night sky
And moon beams shimmering on water nearby
Looking into the distance and out towards sea
On rocky outcrop in shadow, she be
First I noticed her hair, a golden glow
Then her skin glistening, like sun on snow
I reached for my spectacles, sitting in my top pocket
Placing them on my face, twas a sight I’d never regret
Her fish tale silver and all curled around
As she sat on that rock, not making a sound
Just reclining back and combing her hair
Using a pearly shell comb, rhythmically, with care
I was taken a back by this beautiful apparition
I was not one who believed in superstition
A sailors lot can be lonely and long
We all know the stories, of a sirens song
Who could I call on this graveyard shift?
This sighting was all mine, only my gift
I watched her for what, seemed like hours
Mesmerised by her mystic powers
As my night watch on deck, drew to a close
Sailors shouting and moving below, as they arose
I turned my attention back to the rocky outcrop
Wishing the daylight would retreat and stop
She shone and sang for me, all through the night
And left me, a poor sailor, in total delight.
Eyes and body holding back sleepiness, I yawned
Gone was my mermaid, as morning dawned.
Milli 2008
Mermaid or Siren: An Eve figure overlaid with the cult of the Virgin, a sealed vessel enclosing either sexual temptation or sexual virtue, or some paradoxical and potent mixture of the two. Carol Shields, The Republic of Love
The poem above is written by myself and posted here to share, from my page only. Thank you for visiting and there is more to be read about Mermaids from these links below.
The Mermaid
by Heinz Insu Fenkl
To Take the Poetry Wednesday Tour, Please Start Here.
My friend Mister Ifiik has very kindly written a co verse to mine here please
click here to read his version of a Siren.



This is a delight! Beautifully done--it engrossed me! I have always been so fascinated by the mermaid aura.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was a little girl I loved this film: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0040614/
http://www.amazon.com/Mr-Peabody-Mermaid-William-Powell/dp/6302765269
://movies.nytimes.com/movie/33683/Mr-Peabody-and-the-Mermaid/overview
Thank You so much Sue for enhancing my post with this surreal little video. So, so delightful too!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Milli! I'm sure any sailors in the crowd will be simply delighted with this!
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east or west
milli at her best
oh me, only those who live in soliloquy shall ever know the impact a sailor has over a mermaid, or could that be vice-versa?
the compass only made me wade through to my back at
My poem on “want to live” is linked below:
http://rajarishi.multiply.com/journal/item/8/Poetry_Wednesday_-_Want_to_Live_-_007
thanks for the visit
ReplyDeletethere are 1330 couplets
grouped into three main heads
each consists of chapters
each chapter contains again ten couplets.
each couplet can be discussed in detail
sorry i did give u a set for good friday and easter
hope the easter egg and hot bun does you good
happy weekend
thanks for visiting me
hope the sailor at home and the mermaid with him sing along this weekend!!
beautiful poem my dear friend.... I will be putting one up soon, but I will be showing the evil sirens.....not the beautiful mermaids...........
ReplyDeleteI appreciate all the lovely comments and verses left for me here and i have linked your page to mine Mister my friend.
ReplyDeleteWonderful post Milli the mysterious mermaid is a wonderful subject to write about.
ReplyDeleteMermaids
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oiling the machinery of the universe
I love mermaids because of the mystery behind them. You never know, just by looking at them, if they are going to be good or evil. What you've described are the reasons they are so wonderful. Thanks for sharing your love of mermaids with us.
ReplyDeleteExcellent rhythm and rhyming! ...and mermaids are always and enchanting subject
ReplyDeletebeautifully done. my daughter and i were reading it aloud. Loved it!
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