Creative Dabbling..Want to Join me?
Haiku Challenge using these words :
"embraced by the evening"
Embraced by the evening Sinking winter sun bursting with brilliance As my chair awaits me Another attempt. from me here feel free to join me.
Lovely photo Milli!And I love the HaikuI will try to enter in this.http://miadelight.multiply.com/journal/item/320/Creative_Challenge_17-_A_Haiku_Challenge
it IS winter now under isn't it....St Vincent is calm this evening from the looks of it..you always take great pics
Nice job Milli I still have not quite got the hang of haiku's
Beautiful. I (like Naarta) haven't a clue when it comes o Haiku's.....I am Haiku challenged for myself :) But yours was stunning.
the red afterglow looks glorious in your photo!
I really love the photo and words to match!
Love the juxtaposition of the Bench with the background.. it sits smack dab in the middle, dominating black with the land, water and mountains(?) of grey, leaving the glow alone. Love the pic and the Words are in sync with it.
Thank you so much Rashmi I rushed down for this sunset over the water last night. So the grey is the water. When I left the sky turned red and normally I would have got that shot but I left to go home in a hurry because I did not lock the house LOL. Don't tell anyone I said that.
Oh I really love this photo and your words...I want to sit here awhile and feel the glow
The photo is breathtaking and so are the words
Oh a few ways I could interpret this. Two people, embraced by the evening, sat on the bench awaiting the sun to burst it's last fiery light and the red after-glow. This is so really romantic and sensual in how I pick up your thread. What I see are two people in intimacy reaching their peak and than that romantic after-glow. This is very nice! I used free interpretation ... I hope that's OK with you. Anyway ... loved it!~F~
Embraced by the evening Sinking winter sun bursting with brilliance awaiting the red after glow second line had me............beautifully written Milli
I especially LOVE this line!!! Brilliant haiku!!And what a gorgeous picture!!
Wow, I love the picture.http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/459/Creative_Challenge_17_embraced_by_the_evening
I love it...the photo is also excellent...winter gone, spring in the offing...
That's very pretty.
You've captured such beauty in both your poem and photograph. Makes me want to be right there sitting on that bench. Thank you for sharing and thank you too for your comment on mine :).
I particularly like your photo.
Hi Milli. Meeting nearly after a month, as I was not participating much due to my wife's illness. Now. Your Haiku on sunset and photograph are beautiful, as usual. Thanks for sharing. Mine is at - http://jayaramanms.multiply.com/journal/item/254/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE_17
Very nice indeed Milli, and i love your pic: it compliments your words beautifully. The pic is very dreamy and poignant
The photo compliments the words which define the picture. The empty bench also seems to be waiting as your haiku pulls me in waiting the after glow, is it sunset or a warm heart sitting close? or both!. Loved this, wow awesome girl...