Thursday, April 10, 2008

My Late Poetry Entry This Week: Mum's Eightieth.

 

The Surprise Party

 

April the eighth was the big event

Mother’s Eightieth and time well spent

 

First it was lunch out with the gals

Some are family and some are pals

 

Fish n chips was the choice by some

Fish n chips a favourite, of my mum

 

Then off for a small drive around our town

Mother was enjoying, not even one frown

 

I dropped her off home, she wanted it that way

By now afternoon, so home she would stay

 

Taking some rest until there was a door knock

You see guests, would arrive at six o’clock

 

This was a Surprise Eigthieth Birthday Party she knew not where

Until a knock on the door that startles her as she calls " Who's there?"

 

It was my sister followed then by me, with presents, cake, nibbles and drinks

Heavens knows now, what she thinks

 

Because pretty soon there’s more and more

All these guests walking through the door

 

Mum had no idea that she was a special guest

Because to her home, there came family and friends, at my request

 

We had tea and coffee, snacks and cake

And I bought a Black Forrest Cake; I had no time to bake

 

Not wanting a big fuss, she was delighted when I said

“ Mum! You don’t want to go out, so I invited friends instead”

 

It was just a little in-joke between her and I

Because my mother had seen, so many years pass by

 

Ages since we gathered, in Mum’s home for a Special Event

Birthday songs, enjoyment and good time spent

 

Well Wishes done, washed up dishes, time had come for all to run

Mum announced to me “ I have had soooo! much fun!”

 

“The last time I had such a lovely party with such a good mix

Was when I was just a little girl, and I was turning six ”

 

Mum also enjoyed her Special Birthday with pressies, cards and fishnchips

And I think what she enjoys most of all, are family and her friendships.

 

Blessings to You, My Dear Mum, Nancy

Next year at 81, you can tell me what, You Fancy!

 

Written for My Mother’s 80th Birthday

 

On the 8th of April 2008

 

Written By Carol

 

 

 

                   Nancy's 80th copy

 

Poetry Wednesday tour here.

10 comments:

  1. Awwwwww look at her
    someones lovely wife
    I must concur
    still enjoying a lovely life.

    So that was her birthday
    a treatt to be sharing
    some cake on a tray
    and music to be hearing

    she opened the presents
    thinking of the past
    of all her replents
    memories going quite fast

    A pleasant day had by all
    a day filled with glee
    today she had a ball
    and it was all labour free

    So now she is tired
    and needs her granny rest
    while the youn'uns are all wired
    lay your head where it feels best

    Have a good sleep mum,
    youve earned that right
    every time ya whacked me bum
    made you tired at night......
    ................................
    thought ya mum might like that liddl ditty..................

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  2. Happy Birthday Mom (You do not mind do you I often feel like your sis)
    Sorry it's late
    I am in such a state.
    Rah Rah shake the poms
    Happy Birthday to MOM.


    May she have so many more Milli. This one is approaching for my mom as well.

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  3. Wonderful tribute, for a Mother who's heart makes her face glow. May she have many more birthdays.

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  4. Thanks Dear friends for your wonderful contributions to my page here and I will show mum a print out of this page soon. Hugs from Milli.

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  5. and of course i have supplied for Wednesday poetry Upma Kozhakkattai especially on mom's thoughts, a beautiful tribute from a wonderful soul that is you, now i get your name also Carol has sung her mummy a carol? thanks for visiting my wed poetry, please go to the hostess and see for south indian brunch which were supplied by me and mr JR both are your contacts, i think it would have been tasted by mom also?

    happy birthday mom, you really look pretty and also shy to pose?

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  6. thanks for your visit to my poetry
    yours is worth its weight (wait) in gold
    so still she is fishy and crispy (gypsy/crispy)
    she looks very calm and composed
    the letter M has such music and musings perhaps the reason you chose Milli a nick name
    yes in any language a mother is rhymed with the syllable "MMMMMMMMMMMMM"
    perhaps to remember that she gave the first kiss to the babe yes lips has to say mmmmmmmmmmm when it gives a kiss.

    love to your mom
    and love to my sis
    makes it love to my mom

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  7. This is just too cute, Milli! I'm sure she's so proud of you for writing it too. Thank you for sharing such a special day with us. I hope your mother has many more years to come!

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  8. "Between womb and tomb and tomb and womb this is the question."
    - An early draft of MacBeth (King of Scotland - died in 1057)
    by William Shake speare/plat0

    Birthday
    birth
    day


    (for Martin LK & Carol's mum:))

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  9. Fantastic poem, fantastic mom and fantastic you! How wonderful, happy and alive she is!
    You did good, girl, brava!
    My mom just turned 90 and lives independently in Florida! Bless them.

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  10. I have now printed out all the greetings here for mum and will share them with her tonight and I will return to let you all know what she says. Thank you my dear friends one and all.

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