Thursday, July 15, 2010

Creative Challenge 110 ~ On My Mind

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“A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world.”

 

Oscar Wilde

On My Mind

Many thoughts go through my mind

I could be called the thinking kind

Deliberation ever present 

What is necessary verses that

Which isn't 

Too much Internal dialogue

Can deplete a mind

So when practical I indulge in thoughts

Of a more positive kind

Once I was a worry wart

Negativism came with every thought

Now I weigh the good and bad

Make my choice and don't feel sad

Think less and act more

Rationalising 

That I can always use 

My imagination and creativity

To learn new skills and explore.

Milli 10

PS. I hope this verse did not you

Bore!

 

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16 comments:

  1. No, this verse did not me bore,
    Glad you think positively more. ;)

    That is a stunning pic, Milli. And I can so relate to your poem. Life is so much more enjoyable when we act rather than fret and worry and deliberate every decision, eh? Sometimes it is great just to throw caution tt the wind!

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  2. Indeed Joe these days I have stilled my mind at times when necessary and I live in my moments often...thank you. Have a cuppa for me lol.

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  3. Is that a Gator I can see on the shore line?
    All that glitters is not gold, and that we get from being old.
    So mind that dainty foot of yours tread gingerly on yon shore.
    A nice view that could be improved with you explaining it to me.
    Yes yes I know where the queue starts.
    The Gator is moving towards its end. lol

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  4. Hi Bill no such thrill
    We have no gators
    In this still.
    I took the photo at the dawn
    Near to where the fishes spawn
    You can see the board walk on the side
    Pelicans and seabirds do here reside.

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  5. Though it takes decades to get here....it seems as though most of us arrive to what you speak of.....and it truly is wonderful. Why it takes us so long to learn I don't know ....but now we eagerly gulp the experiences.

    Beautifully written and so special because as I said.....most of us can relate.

    Thanks for visiting, Milli, and as always your comments make me smile

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  6. That was great. I enjoyed the rythem in reading that. Great work and thank you for your comments.

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  7. No, this verse did not me bore. LOL. This offers wonderful lessons for those of us who tend to worry too much. You're right: Turn it into a decision to accept or reject. That puts paid to the lot of it.

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  8. This verse wasnt a bore
    It brings to light, matters of the core
    We all have negativities behind closed doors
    It matters whether we let them in or shut them out
    After a while with awareness, we can turn them inside out :).

    That Pic makes me want to have been there when it was taken.

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  9. ~smile~ ... that verse was anything but a bore ..... I kind of wanted it to carry on and on!!
    Loved it .....

    Thanks for the visit ....

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  10. not boring at all, some great advice, think less act more...love that idea, hard for a worry wart like me, but I try

    the gorgeous calmness in the photo compliments your words very nicely too

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  11. Positive and affirming, then the last line is a nice turn. A bit of a giggle at the end!

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  12. Thoughtfully written to the inspiration of a thought-provoking photo. Nice.

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  13. Very thoughtful - I wear my "worry wart" hat with pride though !! LOL

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  14. Milli, I can't imagine you ever being a worry wart! This is a very nice poem and the photo is gorgeous!

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