Creative Challenge 104
They Tied The Knot.
It took a while
I saw her smile
As Today
They tied the knot
And why not?
Together for many years already
Things were now great,all nice and steady
The paper does not mean more love
Nor more blessings from above
But it surely does formalise their union
And they are of this opinion
That when you have found your mate
Then why wait
Any longer, when formalise you can
That's why she smiled,she had wed her man.
So they tied the knot
Signed on the dot
As we all smiled for this happy pair
Whose love for each other was evident
EVERYWHERE!!!
Milli 10
Very nice, Milli!
ReplyDeleteWow. It's a fantastic piece. U do have a talent and it shows in this piece. Well done Milli.
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Thank you SpaceEagle..
ReplyDeleteThank You Very Much Nik....I am enjoying that you are enjoying my creative writings...
ReplyDeleteAwww... so sweet a knot! :)
ReplyDeleteWeddings...smile. Raising my coffee mug to the couple ;).
ReplyDeleteHow right you are that a "piece of paper" does not mean "more love".
Have a great day, matie ;).
weddings do make for smiles and laughter, a happy occasion when two tie the knot...well done Milli!
ReplyDeletegreat take on the theme
ReplyDeleteah marriages....it really brings out the poet in us!
ReplyDeletevery nice blog!
That was so sweetly done... I agree with the lady, why wait. The paper doesnt mean more love, it only means Now the Others Know they love ;).
ReplyDeleteLoosely around that mooring point, a Bowline on a bite?
ReplyDeleteUp and down it rides smoothly whenever the tides bring fright
Loose in winds it rides the storm that time is sure to bring
Then one day when all is calm comes a voice, let go springs.
Now we are married.
Knot bad!!
ReplyDeleteawwwwww....knotted love is always the best kind! Nicely versed.
ReplyDeletethanks for visiting mine and nice comment , Milli
Wonderful expression.
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Soooo lovely this knot. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a romantic and lovely knot, Milli!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit.
Lovely and beautiful. Makes me want to be part of the experience.
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Hi nice lovely poem...n romantic too..how r u doing long time not seen u
ReplyDeleteAwesome and lovely poem !!!!!
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