Sunday, September 6, 2009

Poem Posse ~ 47~ Senses

 

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Souls Search

I am drawn by your beauty

Mesmerised by your brilliance

Filled with your charm

You are my deepest desire

I capture your essence for a moment

Yet!

 You remain unobtainable.

Milli09

 

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  1. ÐëÎty ®September 6, 2009 at 11:56 PM

    This could be about anything else, a free for all imagery depending on the reader. I envision a lovely woman, with desirable charms yet enigmatic. Or it could be that mysterious boitoi who stands in a corner, emanating charm, making me want to make it mine.

    Love it! Well done, Ms. Mills.

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  2. Milli MusingsSeptember 6, 2009 at 11:59 PM

    Thanks Deity.. it is all up to the reader...and I love your imagery in the comments, for this post.

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  3. ÐëÎty ®September 7, 2009 at 12:02 AM

    i am kinda sleepy. i am imagining a lot of things. ha! you have a good rest as well ^^

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  4. Rita VarneySeptember 7, 2009 at 12:11 AM

    grat Job Milli, I have yet to give it a go.

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  5. Pat ESeptember 7, 2009 at 12:56 AM

    Lovely /:-)

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  6. Mindsnomad YaySeptember 7, 2009 at 12:58 AM

    We surely want what we cant have ;). Yes, it evokes the senses.

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  7. Bill JohnsonSeptember 7, 2009 at 1:14 AM

    Motivated by a wonderful sky, so perfectly proportioned, it is of little surprise it evoked the accompanying verse to make the perfect equation.

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  8. Rita VarneySeptember 7, 2009 at 1:44 AM

    Milli I came back with my link.
    http://naarta.multiply.com/journal/item/835/POETRY_POSSE_47_SENSES

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  9. A Slow ReadSeptember 7, 2009 at 2:37 AM

    so near yet so far...lovely words Milli!

    (when i read the title of this I thought 47 senses???..wow thats a lot)

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  10. dana everhartSeptember 7, 2009 at 5:27 AM

    so feel this one...you have been in my notes again, haven't you

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  11. Baz HSeptember 7, 2009 at 5:29 AM

    Nicely done Milli

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  12. Doctor ifiik Groper....September 7, 2009 at 6:18 AM

    beautiful Milli......
    *wipes tear from left eye*.......
    makes me think of sooooooo many things I'd forgotten.................

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  13. Pat AngloswissSeptember 7, 2009 at 6:23 AM

    Keeping things nicely in the balance

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  14. T JSeptember 7, 2009 at 12:37 PM

    Beautiful, Milli! It's a dream, isn't it?

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  15. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 8:41 PM

    Do that Rita when you can..so much can be written with this theme of senses..

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  16. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 8:41 PM

    Thanks Pat.

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  17. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 8:41 PM

    A human trait Rashmi!

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  18. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 8:42 PM

    I am so easily motivated I think Bill. So are you.

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  19. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 8:58 PM

    LOL Heather that is so many senses. This was only a short write.

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  20. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 8:58 PM

    Wink Wink!! LOL

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  21. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 8:59 PM

    Thanks Baz..

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  22. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 9:00 PM

    You can never forget that which resides in your heart Peter.

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  23. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 9:00 PM

    Thanks Pat.

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  24. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 9:01 PM

    Bill I loose her sometimes but then she begs to be heard...

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  25. Milli MusingsSeptember 7, 2009 at 9:01 PM

    Teri this can be a dream ..yes. Big smiles for you!

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  26. Tarra DiddleSeptember 8, 2009 at 3:25 AM

    Very deep...and touching! Thank you!

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  27. Bill PateSeptember 11, 2009 at 9:57 AM

    Lose her again, I will come find her.

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  28. SANAT RAVALSeptember 16, 2009 at 3:20 PM

    u touched my heart, Milli...Sanat.

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