tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post4908108131886873566..comments2023-09-24T19:27:33.691+09:30Comments on One In A Million: Creative Challenge # 10 Phrase is "Etched in My Mind."Millihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03404299120079199639noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-90425760210195359592008-07-20T20:59:36.000+09:302008-07-20T20:59:36.000+09:30I wish to thank everyone who stopped by to either ...I wish to thank everyone who stopped by to either comment or read my entry here. Not an easy read or for that matter an easy write. let's see what the next challenge presents us with?Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-87243337555794797432008-07-14T19:59:21.000+09:302008-07-14T19:59:21.000+09:30Brilliant it is, sadness with love and memory. Brilliant it is, sadness with love and memory. Mitch V.http://multiplymitch.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-15154693553882095942008-07-14T14:52:44.000+09:302008-07-14T14:52:44.000+09:30oh, for a moment i thought it was a tragic love st...oh, for a moment i thought it was a tragic love story between man and woman. i became so engrossed with the sorrow .... great poem!Mary Teresehttp://amkyurios.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-72115076424297874182008-07-14T12:32:08.000+09:302008-07-14T12:32:08.000+09:30Loved the semblance here, the rhyming was near per...Loved the semblance here, the rhyming was near perfect and the tribute excellant. I knew early on what this would be about (a horse that is), but not the horse's subsequent ending. Terribly sad for this to have had happen.<br /><br /><a href="http://danceinsilence.multiply.com/journal/item/408" rel="nofollow">http://danceinsilence.multiply.com/journal/item/408</a>Bill Patehttp://danceinsilence.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-56170451090372452302008-07-13T22:05:34.000+09:302008-07-13T22:05:34.000+09:30I also thought of a partnership that was not to be...I also thought of a partnership that was not to be, and it was but not the "human" kind. Very moving poem and when you know the truth behind it all, it hurts even more. Beautiful ode to the memory of the horse.<br /><a href="http://tabbynera.multiply.com/journal/item/685/Creative_Challenge_10_-_Etched_in_my_62_year_old_mind" rel="nofollow">http://tabbynera.multiply.com/journal/item/685/Creative_Challenge_10_-_Etched_in_my_62_year_old_mind</a>Pat Angloswisshttp://tabbynera.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-8083523269244600112008-07-13T13:22:27.000+09:302008-07-13T13:22:27.000+09:30Toni and Peter you are both wonderful and I thank ...Toni and Peter you are both wonderful and I thank you both dearly.Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-8527707247855833922008-07-13T13:20:59.000+09:302008-07-13T13:20:59.000+09:30Tina the poem does have suspense and i thank you f...Tina the poem does have suspense and i thank you for your visit.<br /><br />Grant I am very glad that you enjoyed the poem. Sad it is indeed.<br /><br />Zee Zee and you write an inspiring comment too.<br /><br />Thanks Rashmi for your wonderful touch here too and maybe another horse who knows.<br /><br />Kittigory I wi need to read St Maur.<br /><br />Thanks Vickie so very much.<br /><br />Barb how wonderful that you found my poem this way. Fantastic.Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-23996853985424669432008-07-13T13:13:49.000+09:302008-07-13T13:13:49.000+09:30What you said here Bill touched my heart.What you said here Bill touched my heart.Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-20848109351211029912008-07-13T13:12:46.000+09:302008-07-13T13:12:46.000+09:30heck no Friggincrazy. Not at all. I wrote about th...heck no Friggincrazy. Not at all. I wrote about the bond felt between a horse lover and how the horse reciprocates. As i said earlier I used innuendo in the beginning because it can be like a love affair between the horse owner and their steed.Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-44217231545983953852008-07-13T12:43:07.000+09:302008-07-13T12:43:07.000+09:30Got me too. I'm sorry for the horse. Does th...Got me too. I'm sorry for the horse. Does this make me a bad person? If it was a cheating lover not sure I'd have the same feelings as I do the horse.Laurie Lynnhttp://friggncrazy.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-59428124249613190732008-07-13T10:04:02.000+09:302008-07-13T10:04:02.000+09:30beautifully written darlin...........beautiful.......beautifully written darlin...........beautiful.........................Doctor ifiik Groper....http://ifiik.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-68066861720788230522008-07-13T08:47:43.000+09:302008-07-13T08:47:43.000+09:30I'm in tears here I'm at a true loss for w...I'm in tears here I'm at a true loss for words....beautifully writtenToni Jhttp://tonij16102.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-66690931810165495082008-07-13T05:27:42.000+09:302008-07-13T05:27:42.000+09:30Fabulous work...so many metaphors. Sad but bold d...Fabulous work...so many metaphors. Sad but bold daring and true. <a href="http://barb4sun.multiply.com/journal/item/404/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE...ETCHED_IN_MY_MIND" rel="nofollow">http://barb4sun.multiply.com/journal/item/404/CREATIVE_CHALLENGE...ETCHED_IN_MY_MIND</a>Barb Bhttp://barb4sun.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-77833129530635614622008-07-13T04:11:27.000+09:302008-07-13T04:11:27.000+09:30Wow, I think at first it was a love lost, and then...Wow, I think at first it was a love lost, and then realized it WAS love lost,...just a different kind of live. Good going.<br /><br /><a href="http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/400" rel="nofollow">http://vickiecollins.multiply.com/journal/item/400</a>Vickie Collinshttp://vickiecollins.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-20812754464733254472008-07-13T02:47:17.000+09:302008-07-13T02:47:17.000+09:30Oh my word! What a horrible way to die!
It didn&...Oh my word! What a horrible way to die!<br /><br />It didn't sound like a horse until the end. Reminds me of a novella by D.H. lawrence called St. Maur.T Jhttp://kittigory.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-73824077551419118722008-07-13T01:18:40.000+09:302008-07-13T01:18:40.000+09:30This is such a touching narration.. For a while I ...This is such a touching narration.. For a while I thought it was a haughty lover. Until on the word "steed" did my eyes hover. The lose of a beloved steed, In the heart leaves a painful seed. I hope your friend is feeling better now, As her heart heals, with another Horse's Love.Mindsnomad Yayhttp://mindsnomad.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-57574587090109325992008-07-13T00:50:29.000+09:302008-07-13T00:50:29.000+09:30you wrote a very dynamic piece. I was so engrosse...you wrote a very dynamic piece. I was so engrossed. Most excellent. What a great writer you are.. kudos. ZeeZeeZeeZee Writerhttp://zeezeewriter.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-91162995780135099502008-07-13T00:37:08.000+09:302008-07-13T00:37:08.000+09:30that is a suspenseful poem, I would never had thou...that is a suspenseful poem, I would never had thought it was a horse...great one...take care and god bless.Nini Reciohttp://tinafranc.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-36505144961655534392008-07-13T00:34:21.000+09:302008-07-13T00:34:21.000+09:30First I thought it was a lover and to find it was ...First I thought it was a lover and to find it was a horse filled me with grief as the eyes of a horse looks into one's soul. He wasn't your horse but he had looked at you, imparted his message and with it his trust. I repeat, you get to me Milli.Bill Johnsonhttp://theoneandonlybill.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-13982527485872588102008-07-13T00:17:16.000+09:302008-07-13T00:17:16.000+09:30Danette unpredictable I hope is good?
Thank you fo...Danette unpredictable I hope is good?<br />Thank you for your encouraging comment.Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-41430637665712269522008-07-13T00:15:15.000+09:302008-07-13T00:15:15.000+09:30Thanks Ronnie I must admit to holding the suspense...Thanks Ronnie I must admit to holding the suspense for as long as I could with innuendo before announcing that it was a Horse.Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-29101363668189472902008-07-12T23:57:55.000+09:302008-07-12T23:57:55.000+09:30you always amaze me and the best part it's nev...you always amaze me and the best part it's never predictable!<br />another great write from you...love your styledp ♥http://poetessgarden.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-32935391643100840152008-07-12T23:55:36.000+09:302008-07-12T23:55:36.000+09:30It is sad. I was enthralled the whole way through ...It is sad. I was enthralled the whole way through and in the end was amazed it was a horse. What a woeful thing to happen. This is wonderful Milli. Duchess Ronniehttp://littleronnie.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-82355887520534868472008-07-12T23:30:41.000+09:302008-07-12T23:30:41.000+09:30Thank You too JR and your post was wonderful.Thank You too JR and your post was wonderful.Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-270323250340964084.post-57393551893302964582008-07-12T23:11:55.000+09:302008-07-12T23:11:55.000+09:30Sylvie dear it was not my own horse however I felt...Sylvie dear it was not my own horse however I felt much empathy for the lady whose horse it was. You know horses command from their owners because they are such proud beasts and those pony girls and boys just adore their charges. Thanks so much for your very sweet and heartfelt comment. Hugs from Milli.Milli Musingshttp://millimusings.multiply.comnoreply@blogger.com